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Post by nintendonut1 on Oct 13, 2008 22:25:31 GMT -5
Raz retched, crumpling to the floor before her. "Sh...sh-shut...up...!"
(don't forget, before we go back to the real world, Rip has to take his voice so he won't tell anyone. Doesn't have to be in the next post, though; don't wanna rush this, like you said)
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Post by Felix Falora on Oct 15, 2008 17:27:29 GMT -5
"Hehe, und vhy should I? It looks like I've uncovered a veakness, my pet Dar, und I shall use it as I see fit," Rip Van said, grinning.
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Post by nintendonut1 on Oct 15, 2008 22:06:12 GMT -5
Raz shivered deeply, both from pain and pure fear. He had never felt a pain or violation quite like this before! It scared him, and he felt much more vulnerable as he gazed up helplessly at Rip.
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Post by Felix Falora on Oct 15, 2008 22:12:53 GMT -5
"Such fear, such pain... Such control. I can make you do vhatever I vant vith just zis name... Perfect..."
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Post by nintendonut1 on Oct 15, 2008 22:17:02 GMT -5
"....." Raz hated himself for feeling so damn helpless before this cruel, cruel woman. "...please..." he moaned softly. "..please don't... I don't wanna hurt..."
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Post by Felix Falora on Oct 16, 2008 5:50:00 GMT -5
"Und vhy should I?" Rip Van smirked. Then she heard the door open outside. "Oi, Raz, we're back!" "Damnit... Vell, ve can't let you speak now, Dar, can ve?"
(How should she take his voice?)
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Post by nintendonut1 on Oct 16, 2008 12:12:41 GMT -5
(kinda like in the Little Mermaid XD put his the energy of his voice in, like, a vial or something)
"W-what!? No!" Raz desperately tried to call out to them, still trapped in the mental world. "Trevor! Felix! Double-!" he gapsed.
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Post by Felix Falora on Oct 16, 2008 16:07:15 GMT -5
Rip Van used her musket and shot him through the throat, but instead of leaving a physical wound, it left a different kind of wound. Energy leaked through his throat and Rip Van held her hand out, absorbing it into her body. She then pulled out a vial and expelled it into there. "Now... your voice ist mine... Und you von't be able to say a t'ing... 'Til ve meet again, Dar." With that, Rip Van dissapeared. When Raz came to, he would be getting shaken by Trevor.
"Hey, Raz... you ok?"
"When did he pass out?" Felix asked Nazz.
"A while ago. That's why I tried to call you, but the cellphone was turned off."
"Someone killed ze batteries," Schrodinger said, glaring at Trevor.
"HEY!"
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Post by nintendonut1 on Oct 17, 2008 11:16:55 GMT -5
Raz was kind of spacy, still left shaken.
"It appears he was in a psychic trance," Michiko assumed. "Is that right?"
Weakly, Raz nodded.
"...Raz?" Double D asked, sitting next to him. "Are you alright? You look terribly shaken..."
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Post by Felix Falora on Oct 18, 2008 1:23:46 GMT -5
"Why won't he speak?"
"What's going on?" Shinichi asked as he walked in with Masahiro.
"Raz won't speak. We have a bad feeling something's going on," Felix explained.
Masahiro was looking Raz in the eyes, his ability activating. "Speak," he muttered. But nothing happened. "His voice isn't working. I tried to get him to speak with my ability..."
"YOU TRIED TO MIND CONTROL RAZ?!" Felix yelled, backing up.
"... If he could speak, he would've spoken, but since he can't, nothing happened... When did he lose his voice."
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Post by nintendonut1 on Oct 18, 2008 11:18:44 GMT -5
Mind-control...? ...oh, CRAP! No!
Desperately, Raz hollared and tried to tell them all the danger they were unkowingly in... but nothing came out of his mouth.
"...you're right. This is beyond simply losing his voice. It's completely gone," Fletcher noted. "..oonfh!"
Raz latched onto him, grabbing his vest and shaking him back and forth. At last, he gave up, burying his quietly sobbing face into his shirt.
"...there's something he obviously needs to tell us," Fleetfoot noted, Skywise nodding beside him.
Fletcher looked to Michiko. She nodded.
Raz-kun...? Can you hear m--
"OW!" Michiko recoiled in mental pain, as did Raz.
"M-Michiko!" Fletcher exclaimed as she fell back dizzily into Matilde and Trevor's arms. "What happened??"
"A...a barrier..." she gasped. "Something's blocking me from his mind... I cannot reach him."
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Post by Felix Falora on Oct 18, 2008 13:00:14 GMT -5
"A barrier?" Trevor said, but the three angels were suddenly white.
"C-Could someone..."
"Already be..."
"C-C-Controlling him?"
Masahiro fell to the ground. "Someone's already doing it... Maybe if I push my will farther." With that, Masahiro looked into Raz's eyes. "Speak!" With that word, a giant gaping hole suddenly appeared in Masahiro's stomach. It began to regnerate and Masahiro picked himself up slowly. "Owwwww... Not only is there a barrier... but there's also a defense mechanism... Michiko just didn't get past the barrier, thats all..."
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Post by nintendonut1 on Oct 18, 2008 13:12:25 GMT -5
"So he can't tell us what's going on either way. Fantastic." Fletcher sighed.
"what if he tries, like, writing it out?" Eddy asked.
"Then whatever's controling him will stop him!" Ed replied. "Duh!"
Raz had never felt so helpless in all his life. He deeply hated everyone seeing him like this, but... what else could he do? He collapsed back on the couch, burying his face in his hands.
"Well, then we'll just have to figure it out ourselves," Double D spoke up firmly. "Becasue I can't stand to see him like this. Something's terribly wrong with him."
"...Ras?" Shakily, Raz looked up into the eyes of Marion, who seemed to know that he was upset by her expression.
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Post by Felix Falora on Oct 18, 2008 13:23:41 GMT -5
(Wouldn't this be Marion's first word? If not, I don't want Felix to get spazzy.)
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Post by nintendonut1 on Oct 18, 2008 13:26:32 GMT -5
(no no, I made a note that it wasn't in my first post. She calls Felix "Mama" and Double D "Dada". ^^
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