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Post by nintendonut1 on Jun 27, 2009 20:39:41 GMT -5
"Do I?" He subsciously rubbed his own cheek. "Hmm. I don't feel out of the ordinary."
[Save the meeting? Not sure what you're saying. You mean she'll appear in the next thread, but Double D doesn't see her?]
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Post by gantzgun74 on Jun 28, 2009 16:16:53 GMT -5
[What I mean is, Helga meets Double D for the first time in the thread 'A Monster'. Why not have Double D's condition show itself via... Well you'll see what I mean.)
Otto thought a moment; the point where he saw that change in Double D's character... ...
Whoa hold on..!
Otto got closer to Double D and took a couple of sniffs. Double D probably looked mildly repulsed, and Otto noticed it. "Sorry." He pulled away quickly. "Look Double D, I'm sorry... But something seems wrong with your aura..." He pointed to his nose. "This nose of mine is a powerful thing, making me able to sense auras, as well as follow scent trails."
Double D looked at the boy confused. "It was an ability given to me by Yang... Anyways, your aura seems slightly... off. It still feels the same, to be sure, but something still seems off."
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Post by nintendonut1 on Jun 28, 2009 20:31:46 GMT -5
(Right. The claws become the first noticable sign, but he covers them with gloves at first before they all find out.
So, the City Hall-ness, that'll be before the transformation starts, right? We can always make an excuse to put the rescue of Rosaline on hold, like a lot of records to go through in short visits or something.)
"...really?" Double D looked over himself, patted himself down, looking for anything abnormal about himself. "...mm, that's a little unsettling. It may have something to do with my new status as an angel... I'll be sure to pay attention if anything happens."
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Post by gantzgun74 on Jun 29, 2009 18:32:14 GMT -5
[Rosaline's rescue comes much much later, and I 'mean not in the next thread' much much later. You see, I'm planning out a story line that connects everything together. The 'Mr. Gun's Secret' thread will reveal quite the hole in Otto and Double D's plan to find and stop Him's target; though just what it is will have to wait until we can actually get that thread moving again.
I'll drop you a hint though, Gantz has made an oath to something, and he has no choice but to follow through with it.It isn't with Him though.
Also my reason for introducing the sudden change in Double D's aura is to offer reason for him to stay behind. The group will meet Helga at City Hall, and Helga, as shown in 'A Monster', has not met Double D at the same time she's met Otto and Wally.
(Thinks a moment... before snapping my fingers.) Ah-hah! I've got it! Double D doesn't have to stay behind! I've got an idea.]
Otto looked at Double D oddly, "You sure you're okay?"
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Post by nintendonut1 on Jun 30, 2009 12:05:39 GMT -5
(XDDDDD Whatever you say. I'm just along for the ride!  btw, the friend I'm refering to once had a job working at the ITS. He recently got bumped up to City Hall worker status. There's my hint for you. X3) Double D nodded. "I'm quite fine. But I appreciate the concern all the same." "Come ON, guys!" Ed bounded up and down anxiously, already outside the apartment in the hallway. |
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Post by gantzgun74 on Jun 30, 2009 12:11:42 GMT -5
[You know, if it helps, I can explain a few things via a DC Personal Message. What do you think?]
Wally rushed in right after Ed. "What he said, mate! Come on!"
"We're coming Wally have some patience." He turned to the door, before walking out.
"Come on Courage lets-a-go, little furry mate!" Wally said, motioning for him to come along.
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Post by nintendonut1 on Jun 30, 2009 12:15:10 GMT -5
(that would be helpful indeed, yes. XD)
"Ah! Coming!" Passing by a window, Double D took a breif look at his reflection before quickly following.
(we done here, then?)
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Post by gantzgun74 on Jun 30, 2009 12:24:03 GMT -5
[Sure. by the by, I have a request to make. Do you remember the 'Mr Gun; the Mage of all Trades' Thread you put in the history board? I would appreciate it if you put it in a chronicle category. The previous threads in the series are 'Let's Raze New York Again' (New New York), and 'Breaking In' (El Grande Mall, Library).
The chronicles can be called 'The Exploits of Mr. Gun' or something along those lines.
Anyways, I'll get to that PM, it shouldn't take but a moment.]
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Post by nintendonut1 on Jun 30, 2009 12:35:02 GMT -5
(you got it. Lemme go take care of that...)
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