Post by tsifan on Sept 12, 2010 15:15:36 GMT -5
Hey Guys! TSIFAN Here with a Fanfiction Revival to share on Team Sairentou! I had an anonymous proofreader help me out before I decided to post it, and someone to bring me in the mood to redo chaper one! Disclaimer regarding to Pokemon Mystery Dungeon itself, Pokemon used in these chapters, and also to Shimmer Islands in which is owned and made by SilverWolfLaguz herself.
And of course the characters used right now are owned by me! I'm only a starter when it comes to writing still, and would deeply appreciate a critique and explanation on what to change in my stories.
Please! Read and Enjoy!
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.................Deep blue......
I saw this while staring up into the sky, the occasional light color flashing by.
I felt nothing but pure void below my small and weak body as only the cold wind whipped past my ears and my body.
"What was going on?"
That, I could not answer as I could only feel painful clipping from the Winds making loud obnoxious noises as if a mosquito was present near my ears. There was no warmth to comfort me at the time, as everything soon accelerated in their movements. I then finally saw new colors of dark green, and then brown.
My Eyes Then Widened.
A Sharp pain throbbed from my back, and throughout my body as I could no longer feel my limbs. My vision hazed into a deep abyss of black occasionally as I then no longer felt anything except throbbing pain. I could only listen quietly, to the soft splashing of the water making it's way in the place where pain had decided to fall into me.
"Splash....... Shhh... Splash...."
The only motion around me available, to soothe me of what had happened as of right now. I simply felt nothing more than misery and pain flow through my body and mind as black encased my vision slowly in a horrible crawl. There was no warmth to hold me close at the time. There was nothing.
Nothing
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I. Forgotten Cause
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"Splash....... Shhh... Splash...."
That was the Call of the Water God's Hope, or at least that's what was taught around this place. The Warm sun dazzled the land in it's ambundant rays of light showering all below it with it's warm fuzzy feeling, but of course those who decided to keep away from it through extensive sheltering. Children played at this time, all happy and excitable as they ran about playing the classic games of Tag or Racing Time. The abundant landscape was simply filled with green landscape and a beautiful altar falling near the town's centre, but of course it had stand tall to be seen by many.
This island of beauty and abundancy was known as Jade Island, the center of the Shimmer Islands Chain. Yes, only pokemon roamed these lands with no humans to worry about as it was simply a Pokeparadise.
Imprinted into the soft sand of the warm beach was an odd footprint that could familiarize with one of a reptile's, but when followed drops of colored stains were seen in the area of the footprints. Walking along the beachside was a totodile, that was otherwise smothering himself in the bright colored berries casuing stain marks ot appear spread upon his own face. His scales and marking that were not of light blue color or black were all sea green, and his eye color added on with the sparkling tone to it. His expression was rather to say.... stupidly happy smothered in the sweet, yet tart juice of the berries he held. His navy blue vest weren't spared from the berry blood explosion as it too looked as it painted upon. On his head were a pair of X-ray specs colored Sea Green to match his coloration oddity, but did look rather cunning on the young pokemon. Tied around his neck was a shining blue crystal that seemed to sparkle each time the wave crashed, and it seemed to represent great importance to the child. But of course, his meal did always come first the silly child.
"Hehe, these berries are so ripe and juicy! I love them that way!" The Totodile blurted out to himself giggling as he continued to create footprints upon the soft warm sand. He enjoyed the occasional breeze the wind gave to show some sense of relief and mercy from the wonderfully warm sun that did keep everything in works.
"Ahhh, Oh big brother... if only you were here now~!" The Totodile then continued on, almost in a trance daydream to himself as he suckled his fingers of whatever remnants of the colorful berry juices appeared.
"Heehee, I'm in definate need of a bath now...!" He then exclaimed smiling in a goofy way as he then took off his vest in a swift motion exposing himself to the warm sun rays, his goggles to follow, and finally in a neat way his crystal necklace.
"Wahoo!!!" he then yelled acting as if cannonballing into the water.
"SPLASH"
Water flew almost everywhere as the small totodile spun around within the water a bit to remove the sticky juices left upon his body. In a brief moment he giggled ot himsself and took a breath suddenly submerging the water. He looked around in the water, and it was clear as day for him as he swam around as the native swimmer he was here in a happy motion. He happily did 360 degree twirls, loopidy loops, and sometimes just floated as he then finally fealized his limits for air and remerged upon the surface of the water. Slowly, he floated to shore and took his jacket from the soft sandy beach and dunked it into the water. In only a few moment, he took it out.
"Good as new!" He exclaimed happily as he then took hold of his jacket and put it on. Damp, but better than nothing. He then grabbed up his goggles and stuck it on his head, in a stupid fashion at first of course. Giggles appearing once more, he then put them on correctly. Nothing left to put on as he recalled, and the empty beach grounds to prove so he walked in all plans to go home. Soon, he came into a tune that sounded ever so childishly from his own mouths.
"Ohhh I'm a swimmin down the bay starting to be a singing~
Don't Walk, Don't Walk, lest ye be a land lubber ringing~"
Walking past the rock, in which families of Krabbies lived near.
"I remembered then I had to go home and suddenly spoked~
Oh dear, Oh dear I hope my clothes aren't too soaked~"
Jogging by the Wooden plank that is often used as a seesaw by kids.
"I realize then I was too late to go back home and say g'day~
So I picked up my clothes and my thoughts and began to walk away~"
Skipping off past some lump of dark yellow fur and dark blue clothing.
"When I came back home my mother then scolded me sayin~
Bad boy, bad boy, you should be in your bed a layin~"
Slowly approaching a hole he knew as home.
"I cried out But Mama, but she then said not Buts~
So I then ran into me room and slammed the wood door shut!~"
Finishing his tune he then jumped up in a happy way. He gripped the wooden handles of the ladder he had long gotten from an old buddy as he turned and faced the beahc one last time.
The Rock, The Wood, and the lump. He'd Remember it all.........wait a second.
He didn't remember a lump.
This was a new wonder to the bow as his mind was then overtaken by the exciting curiousity of it all, but of course he had to hurry because daybreak was appearing soon by the fleeting bird's loud cawing and the sky's orangeness growing to expand further. Slowly getting up from the ladder he then hurried over to the lump, and then got a better look at it. It was obvious to anyone it was a pikachu taking a cringing form, but main things to point out was the fact his fur tone was darker overall makign him look rather evil in a sense. He wore a raggedy scarf that showed to be a faded Dark blue as well as the Dark Blue jacket it wore. From what the Totodile could tell it wasn't moving.
".....Ooooooooh... This be one weird Pikachu thing.... I wonder why it's sleepin~" The Totodile then spoke to himself in his fairly unmatured voice as he then shook the small pikachu.
"Pikachu? Wake up weird pikachu! Are you an alien?" The totodile spoke more loudly as he shook the pikachu in a fast motion that was probably enough to make one puke.
"......urm..... urgh...... my head...." the voice was very weak although obviously male as he opened his eyelids to reveal silver eyes.
"...IT woke up! Tell me what planet are you from?" the Totodile suddenly questioned to the recovering pikachu as he shook the pikachu more erratically.
"UUrgghgh..!!! I'm gonna hurlllll!!!!" The pikachu then suddenly exclaimed as he was shaken by the Totodile.
"Oh okay! But tell me what planet you are from! And what's your name! And Wh-....Ewwwww!!!" Was all the totodile had spoken before encountering for the first time a Pikachu hurling out int other ocean the contents of whatever it had eaten before.
"Urgh..... I feel better at least.... sorry you had to see that...." The Pikachu then replied softly as he wiped his mouth with the back of his paw.
"...Now what did you ask me...?" He finished off staring up to the Totodile with his silver eyes.
"....OH YEAH! What's your name..? And how old are you? I'm Enkaiken and I'm..... uhh..... I think I'm 7!" The Totodile exclaimed revealing his name to the Pikachu.
"Oh... I'm.... hrm...... I'm.... I think my name is Raikougai..." The pikachu responded softly under his voice.
"....*snerks*... You've got a funny name RaiRai!" Enkaiken suddenly exclaimed giggling insanely as hetried to muffle his giggle with his mouth.
"H-hey! Enkaiken is a weird name too and... my name isn't 'RaiRai'! It's Raikougai!" Raikougai replied somewhat angered by the giggly Totodile.
"Teehee, I think RaiRai is better~... Wow the ocean is really pretty today~" Enkaiken then replied softly as his gigling went into a halt as he stared into the horizon of the crystal blue ocean reflecting the now orange sky casuign a mixture in coloration.
"..Yeah... it is....." Raikougai suddnely responded softly. He had totlaly forgotten the previosu subject and now stared off into the horizon with Enkaiken.
"It reminds me of my pretty crystal Riiiight...." Enkaiken replied softly as he clutched his chest.... his hands were empty.
"...You mean your heart?" Raikougai asked confused.
"....It's gone...."
"What's gone?"
"My Crystal"
"You mean your Heart?"
"It's GONE!"
"I think you still have a hea-"
"WHERE DID I LOSE IT?!"
Immediately now the Totodile got up and ran around in a pace that almost showed to be identical to lightspeed. Whereas the Pikachu slowly got up due to his sore body and watched all this. This 'Crystal' the Hyperactive Totodile was talking about.... sounded important..... Really important....
".... I'll help you find it...." Raikougai spoke out suddenly in a quiet tone.
"...R-really?! .... Oh... THANKS SO MUCH RAIRAI!!!" Enkaiken suddnely blurted out overcome with tears tackle hugging the poor near crippled Pikachu with a death hug.
"Arghh..!! Augh..! Let go! I'm gonna die...!!!!" Raikougai suddnely gasped out as he was tackled, he felt pain in his back from the killer hug as not much air passed.
"ooh! Right... sorry Rairai..." Enkaiken then said softly standing up wiping his tears.
"Yea... it's okay... and...!" Was all Raikougai said before he then spotted a small Chatot hopping with a crystal in his beak sparkling in the orange light.
"And whuh...?" Enkaiken asked confused as the bird hopped around a bit, unsuspecting the duo standing right near it.
"...Cover your eyes.."
"Cover my whuh?"
"Cover your eyes"
"Okay... but I don't know how that will help."
Enkaiekn put both paws over his eyes as Raikougai then started to glow brightly.
"FLASH!"
Suddnely his body tensed up a bit as light spewed in all directions, and mainly into the crystal that was held by the Chatot that hit it reflecting the deadly rays into it's eyes.
"SQUAAAWWWK!!!"
In that short moment the Chatot took flight, but due to erratical flying from impaired vision he dropped the crystal halfway. It fell, and stabbed itself into the sand, in which Raikougai soon walked over to.... and picked it up.
He felt his paw and claw tips on the smooth surface of it, and it felt so refined. And ever so pure. It alsmost Mesme-
"I heard noises!"
"Wh- oh right. You can open your eyes now..!"
Enkaiken then dropped his paws, and looked over to Raikougai. Holding the crystal.
"...OH MY GOSH THANKYOU SO MUCH!" Enkaiken Blurted out suddnely tackle hugging Raikoguai once more with a back breaker as the Pikachu squirmed.
"E-Enkaiken...!!!" He grunted as the Totodile released him soon enough... and put on the sparkly necklace... with a smile on his face.
"Sorry... I'm just... Really happy for what you did for me Rairai.... but... can I ask you for something...?"
"Urm... Sure I guess."
"...Could... Could"
"Yeah...?"
"...Could you join me on an Exploration Team! As the Leader!"
This froze Raikougai on the spot. What was this Totodile talkign about Exploration Teams...? He never heard or remembered of such things. Then again he doens't remember a LOT of things, but STILL!
Though then again, it could help him figure out some things... Heck it might be fun, besides he had nothing better to do.
"...I....Urm..."
"...Well...?"
"....Yes.... Yes I would like to make an exploration Team with you Enkaiken..."
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And of course the characters used right now are owned by me! I'm only a starter when it comes to writing still, and would deeply appreciate a critique and explanation on what to change in my stories.
Please! Read and Enjoy!
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.................Deep blue......
I saw this while staring up into the sky, the occasional light color flashing by.
I felt nothing but pure void below my small and weak body as only the cold wind whipped past my ears and my body.
"What was going on?"
That, I could not answer as I could only feel painful clipping from the Winds making loud obnoxious noises as if a mosquito was present near my ears. There was no warmth to comfort me at the time, as everything soon accelerated in their movements. I then finally saw new colors of dark green, and then brown.
My Eyes Then Widened.
A Sharp pain throbbed from my back, and throughout my body as I could no longer feel my limbs. My vision hazed into a deep abyss of black occasionally as I then no longer felt anything except throbbing pain. I could only listen quietly, to the soft splashing of the water making it's way in the place where pain had decided to fall into me.
"Splash....... Shhh... Splash...."
The only motion around me available, to soothe me of what had happened as of right now. I simply felt nothing more than misery and pain flow through my body and mind as black encased my vision slowly in a horrible crawl. There was no warmth to hold me close at the time. There was nothing.
Nothing
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I. Forgotten Cause
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"Splash....... Shhh... Splash...."
That was the Call of the Water God's Hope, or at least that's what was taught around this place. The Warm sun dazzled the land in it's ambundant rays of light showering all below it with it's warm fuzzy feeling, but of course those who decided to keep away from it through extensive sheltering. Children played at this time, all happy and excitable as they ran about playing the classic games of Tag or Racing Time. The abundant landscape was simply filled with green landscape and a beautiful altar falling near the town's centre, but of course it had stand tall to be seen by many.
This island of beauty and abundancy was known as Jade Island, the center of the Shimmer Islands Chain. Yes, only pokemon roamed these lands with no humans to worry about as it was simply a Pokeparadise.
Imprinted into the soft sand of the warm beach was an odd footprint that could familiarize with one of a reptile's, but when followed drops of colored stains were seen in the area of the footprints. Walking along the beachside was a totodile, that was otherwise smothering himself in the bright colored berries casuing stain marks ot appear spread upon his own face. His scales and marking that were not of light blue color or black were all sea green, and his eye color added on with the sparkling tone to it. His expression was rather to say.... stupidly happy smothered in the sweet, yet tart juice of the berries he held. His navy blue vest weren't spared from the berry blood explosion as it too looked as it painted upon. On his head were a pair of X-ray specs colored Sea Green to match his coloration oddity, but did look rather cunning on the young pokemon. Tied around his neck was a shining blue crystal that seemed to sparkle each time the wave crashed, and it seemed to represent great importance to the child. But of course, his meal did always come first the silly child.
"Hehe, these berries are so ripe and juicy! I love them that way!" The Totodile blurted out to himself giggling as he continued to create footprints upon the soft warm sand. He enjoyed the occasional breeze the wind gave to show some sense of relief and mercy from the wonderfully warm sun that did keep everything in works.
"Ahhh, Oh big brother... if only you were here now~!" The Totodile then continued on, almost in a trance daydream to himself as he suckled his fingers of whatever remnants of the colorful berry juices appeared.
"Heehee, I'm in definate need of a bath now...!" He then exclaimed smiling in a goofy way as he then took off his vest in a swift motion exposing himself to the warm sun rays, his goggles to follow, and finally in a neat way his crystal necklace.
"Wahoo!!!" he then yelled acting as if cannonballing into the water.
"SPLASH"
Water flew almost everywhere as the small totodile spun around within the water a bit to remove the sticky juices left upon his body. In a brief moment he giggled ot himsself and took a breath suddenly submerging the water. He looked around in the water, and it was clear as day for him as he swam around as the native swimmer he was here in a happy motion. He happily did 360 degree twirls, loopidy loops, and sometimes just floated as he then finally fealized his limits for air and remerged upon the surface of the water. Slowly, he floated to shore and took his jacket from the soft sandy beach and dunked it into the water. In only a few moment, he took it out.
"Good as new!" He exclaimed happily as he then took hold of his jacket and put it on. Damp, but better than nothing. He then grabbed up his goggles and stuck it on his head, in a stupid fashion at first of course. Giggles appearing once more, he then put them on correctly. Nothing left to put on as he recalled, and the empty beach grounds to prove so he walked in all plans to go home. Soon, he came into a tune that sounded ever so childishly from his own mouths.
"Ohhh I'm a swimmin down the bay starting to be a singing~
Don't Walk, Don't Walk, lest ye be a land lubber ringing~"
Walking past the rock, in which families of Krabbies lived near.
"I remembered then I had to go home and suddenly spoked~
Oh dear, Oh dear I hope my clothes aren't too soaked~"
Jogging by the Wooden plank that is often used as a seesaw by kids.
"I realize then I was too late to go back home and say g'day~
So I picked up my clothes and my thoughts and began to walk away~"
Skipping off past some lump of dark yellow fur and dark blue clothing.
"When I came back home my mother then scolded me sayin~
Bad boy, bad boy, you should be in your bed a layin~"
Slowly approaching a hole he knew as home.
"I cried out But Mama, but she then said not Buts~
So I then ran into me room and slammed the wood door shut!~"
Finishing his tune he then jumped up in a happy way. He gripped the wooden handles of the ladder he had long gotten from an old buddy as he turned and faced the beahc one last time.
The Rock, The Wood, and the lump. He'd Remember it all.........wait a second.
He didn't remember a lump.
This was a new wonder to the bow as his mind was then overtaken by the exciting curiousity of it all, but of course he had to hurry because daybreak was appearing soon by the fleeting bird's loud cawing and the sky's orangeness growing to expand further. Slowly getting up from the ladder he then hurried over to the lump, and then got a better look at it. It was obvious to anyone it was a pikachu taking a cringing form, but main things to point out was the fact his fur tone was darker overall makign him look rather evil in a sense. He wore a raggedy scarf that showed to be a faded Dark blue as well as the Dark Blue jacket it wore. From what the Totodile could tell it wasn't moving.
".....Ooooooooh... This be one weird Pikachu thing.... I wonder why it's sleepin~" The Totodile then spoke to himself in his fairly unmatured voice as he then shook the small pikachu.
"Pikachu? Wake up weird pikachu! Are you an alien?" The totodile spoke more loudly as he shook the pikachu in a fast motion that was probably enough to make one puke.
"......urm..... urgh...... my head...." the voice was very weak although obviously male as he opened his eyelids to reveal silver eyes.
"...IT woke up! Tell me what planet are you from?" the Totodile suddenly questioned to the recovering pikachu as he shook the pikachu more erratically.
"UUrgghgh..!!! I'm gonna hurlllll!!!!" The pikachu then suddenly exclaimed as he was shaken by the Totodile.
"Oh okay! But tell me what planet you are from! And what's your name! And Wh-....Ewwwww!!!" Was all the totodile had spoken before encountering for the first time a Pikachu hurling out int other ocean the contents of whatever it had eaten before.
"Urgh..... I feel better at least.... sorry you had to see that...." The Pikachu then replied softly as he wiped his mouth with the back of his paw.
"...Now what did you ask me...?" He finished off staring up to the Totodile with his silver eyes.
"....OH YEAH! What's your name..? And how old are you? I'm Enkaiken and I'm..... uhh..... I think I'm 7!" The Totodile exclaimed revealing his name to the Pikachu.
"Oh... I'm.... hrm...... I'm.... I think my name is Raikougai..." The pikachu responded softly under his voice.
"....*snerks*... You've got a funny name RaiRai!" Enkaiken suddenly exclaimed giggling insanely as hetried to muffle his giggle with his mouth.
"H-hey! Enkaiken is a weird name too and... my name isn't 'RaiRai'! It's Raikougai!" Raikougai replied somewhat angered by the giggly Totodile.
"Teehee, I think RaiRai is better~... Wow the ocean is really pretty today~" Enkaiken then replied softly as his gigling went into a halt as he stared into the horizon of the crystal blue ocean reflecting the now orange sky casuign a mixture in coloration.
"..Yeah... it is....." Raikougai suddnely responded softly. He had totlaly forgotten the previosu subject and now stared off into the horizon with Enkaiken.
"It reminds me of my pretty crystal Riiiight...." Enkaiken replied softly as he clutched his chest.... his hands were empty.
"...You mean your heart?" Raikougai asked confused.
"....It's gone...."
"What's gone?"
"My Crystal"
"You mean your Heart?"
"It's GONE!"
"I think you still have a hea-"
"WHERE DID I LOSE IT?!"
Immediately now the Totodile got up and ran around in a pace that almost showed to be identical to lightspeed. Whereas the Pikachu slowly got up due to his sore body and watched all this. This 'Crystal' the Hyperactive Totodile was talking about.... sounded important..... Really important....
".... I'll help you find it...." Raikougai spoke out suddenly in a quiet tone.
"...R-really?! .... Oh... THANKS SO MUCH RAIRAI!!!" Enkaiken suddnely blurted out overcome with tears tackle hugging the poor near crippled Pikachu with a death hug.
"Arghh..!! Augh..! Let go! I'm gonna die...!!!!" Raikougai suddnely gasped out as he was tackled, he felt pain in his back from the killer hug as not much air passed.
"ooh! Right... sorry Rairai..." Enkaiken then said softly standing up wiping his tears.
"Yea... it's okay... and...!" Was all Raikougai said before he then spotted a small Chatot hopping with a crystal in his beak sparkling in the orange light.
"And whuh...?" Enkaiken asked confused as the bird hopped around a bit, unsuspecting the duo standing right near it.
"...Cover your eyes.."
"Cover my whuh?"
"Cover your eyes"
"Okay... but I don't know how that will help."
Enkaiekn put both paws over his eyes as Raikougai then started to glow brightly.
"FLASH!"
Suddnely his body tensed up a bit as light spewed in all directions, and mainly into the crystal that was held by the Chatot that hit it reflecting the deadly rays into it's eyes.
"SQUAAAWWWK!!!"
In that short moment the Chatot took flight, but due to erratical flying from impaired vision he dropped the crystal halfway. It fell, and stabbed itself into the sand, in which Raikougai soon walked over to.... and picked it up.
He felt his paw and claw tips on the smooth surface of it, and it felt so refined. And ever so pure. It alsmost Mesme-
"I heard noises!"
"Wh- oh right. You can open your eyes now..!"
Enkaiken then dropped his paws, and looked over to Raikougai. Holding the crystal.
"...OH MY GOSH THANKYOU SO MUCH!" Enkaiken Blurted out suddnely tackle hugging Raikoguai once more with a back breaker as the Pikachu squirmed.
"E-Enkaiken...!!!" He grunted as the Totodile released him soon enough... and put on the sparkly necklace... with a smile on his face.
"Sorry... I'm just... Really happy for what you did for me Rairai.... but... can I ask you for something...?"
"Urm... Sure I guess."
"...Could... Could"
"Yeah...?"
"...Could you join me on an Exploration Team! As the Leader!"
This froze Raikougai on the spot. What was this Totodile talkign about Exploration Teams...? He never heard or remembered of such things. Then again he doens't remember a LOT of things, but STILL!
Though then again, it could help him figure out some things... Heck it might be fun, besides he had nothing better to do.
"...I....Urm..."
"...Well...?"
"....Yes.... Yes I would like to make an exploration Team with you Enkaiken..."
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