Return of the Guy

[42zombies]

I just finished the fourth script in my Odd-Jobbers series. Check it out.

www.webook.com/submission.aspx?p=3e45f3ac012b45b2b5d4b39eff91802d&st=749d85a33181462ba3b573c8d2703e65

Check out the TV Tropes page, too.

tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/WebOriginal/Odd-Jobbers

I'm looking for criticism. Any criticism at all.